Repulsion
A slimy, repulsive beast slithers in from the darkness,
Lunging out towards you and hissing at its starkest,
You ignorant fool, you cannot run away,
There’s no way to escape this desolate fray.
And still you squander off onto the wrong path,
Fueling madly this enraged creature’s wrath,
You spew out those words in complete disbelief,
Still yearning for some kind of kindred relief.
You look over your shoulder only to see the shadows draw near,
A shriek too inflated to be contained darts into your ear,
Yet still you lie there in your warmongering distaste,
Unable to match this demon fiend’s haste.
In this incomprehensible confusion, in this messed up demonic realm, come to your demise.
This filthy hellion that stands in your path is nothing more than those damnable lies.
Ah, a return to your end-twisting couplet, and a dandy one at that.
Hehe, thanks. You know I love my endings.
oooh. Beautiful imagery. Also;
I think you’re pretty awesome, so I’ve given you the Very Inspiring Blog Award.
Thanks for being awesome.
http://conversingwithnovels.wordpress.com/2012/02/11/very-inspiring-blog-award/
Participation not compulsory.
Thank you so much, Amber, I’ll get around to doing it soon.
Wow!
“This filthy hellion that stands in your path is nothing more than those damnable lies.” I can’t agree more! Well put!
Thanks!
I love your writing style! I always re-read to catch more meaning of your words, and always see that I have missed something.
Great visual, awesome words. ♥
Thanks muse, I’m flattered by your constant encouragement.
Thank you. Your poem hit home for me. All that is dishonest is really the root of so much unhappiness.
Thank you for reading it. Dishonesty ruins us – only if we don’t stop it in time.